tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6923757146044251800.post8230022442338749363..comments2023-05-17T08:16:40.099-04:00Comments on Kids of the Homefront Army: Scrap MetalUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6923757146044251800.post-51740073688448339612011-07-24T20:09:26.201-04:002011-07-24T20:09:26.201-04:00Really terrific, D.Really terrific, D.I'm Jet . . .https://www.blogger.com/profile/18126808059666263516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6923757146044251800.post-63885517285214756212011-07-22T22:11:56.944-04:002011-07-22T22:11:56.944-04:00Thanks for visiting everyone! Come back on Monday...Thanks for visiting everyone! Come back on Monday.Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6923757146044251800.post-5316193696008060332011-07-22T21:45:30.606-04:002011-07-22T21:45:30.606-04:00Very moving poem. Thanks for sharing. =)Very moving poem. Thanks for sharing. =)GatheringBookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04477710897574769648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6923757146044251800.post-32863312257997704622011-07-22T11:36:56.633-04:002011-07-22T11:36:56.633-04:00This is incredibly good, Diane. Taut and evocative...This is incredibly good, Diane. Taut and evocative!<br /><br />As part of my ongoing study of metric and nonmetric verse, I'm curious about the structure of this poem. Are your choices of line breaks more or less instinctual, or do you break for specific emphasis or rhythmic effect? Email me at stevenwithrow@yahoo.com if you have a chance.Steven Withrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08424518148189688086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6923757146044251800.post-25085495184446783012011-07-22T11:35:31.564-04:002011-07-22T11:35:31.564-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Steven Withrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08424518148189688086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6923757146044251800.post-9747524406010808762011-07-22T10:39:30.071-04:002011-07-22T10:39:30.071-04:00I am just loving your WWII poems, Diane.I am just loving your WWII poems, Diane.Andrea Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11926896897768609275noreply@blogger.com